Breathe Me In [a new song]

So I was finishing up a DB post and some words popped into my head. I wrote 'em down and this is what came out. I really like it, it's got a few things I need to fix but other than that, I'm almost ready to record it. =]

I never thought I’d let you go; oh, I’d never wanna see you alone.
I thought it be easier this way, I’d let you go away, but now I can’t feel you surround me
I didn’t think I’d see you here, throwing your arms, around me.
I never thought I’d bring you the roses.

When I’m away, I never thought I’d see you, or feel you
When I’m alone, I feel like I could die, but it just make you cry, I never meant to hurt you inside
When I can’t breathe you in, I feel like I could see you
When I can’t, throw my arms around you, I can’t control myself without you
I never thought I’d be here without you…running away

Now the walls are closing in, and I’m lost without your sin
There’s an ever growing symphony, and no I can’t make out the words
But I can hear your voice inside me singing “get up, get out, get going”
And there, is, a light, a light that shine so bright through the night
I can never hear your voice again, and I am slowly breaking down within.

When I’m away, I never thought I’d see you, or feel you
When I’m alone, I feel like I could die, but it just make you cry, I never meant to hurt you inside
When I can’t breathe you in, I feel like I could see you
When I can’t, throw my arms around you, I can’t control myself without you
I never thought I’d be here without you…running away

(bridge)
So, so, so, can you hear me? I am screaming within
Can you feel me; I’m flying in the wind
Can you see me; I am lost again
So can you, can you, breathe me in.